Book Review: The Network by Jason Elliot

Elberry reviews a new spy thriller…

Judging from British charity shops, SAS memoirs are being continuously bought, possibly read, and then discarded. They are popular but not, it seems, held on to for re-reading. Since the 1980 Princes Gate siege, the SAS have become a part of urban mythology, as supermen who can kill 250 Iraqis with a broken compass and a lump of camel dung; there have been a slew of SAS-themed TV programmes, with retired members talking about their missions and even kind-of training keen civilian volunteers in the dark arts; worse, some SAS have started to call themselves “Blades”. Most SAS memoirs are not very interesting, with the exceptions of Duncan Falconer’s First Into Action (strictly speaking, SBS) and Frank Collins’ Baptism of Fire. That is, they have plenty of interesting scenes and facts but are low on characterisation or any sense of how the facts feel (Nick Hornby: “You can tell someone the facts in ten seconds, if you want to, but the facts are nothing”). So, not the kind of books you keep and pass on to your grandchildren.

The Network is a kind-of SAS-espionage thriller and will, I guess, appeal to the people who buy and discard SAS memoirs. Jason Elliot, I learn, is a travel writer who went to Afghanistan in the 1979 aged 19 and fought alongside the Mujahedin. This presumably entailed using weaponry and trying to kill Soviet soldiers, and trying to avoid being killed, and learning the language, customs, and terrain; such a background would have made him interesting to American and British military intelligence.

The facts, then. A chap who voluntarily dropped out of military intelligence is re-recruited for a mission to Afghanistan. He’s trained by an ex-SAS man called ‘H’. He travels about, has the obligatory affair with a sultry temptress. He gets in scrapes. He runs about. He gets in cars. People point guns at him. People shoot at him. He punches people. He kicks people. He ends up in a hill fort trying to blow up some Stinger missiles. And so on. There are all the usual cliches but it’s hard to write such a book without a sultry temptress, a training scene, violence, and what not. It wouldn’t really be a thriller if your hero watches Richard and Judy and goes to the pub and then gets a job in a bank and steals some photocopier paper and is reprimanded, the end.

The cliches are well done, though they still feel like cliches. That is, you feel them coming, you expect them from the moment you see the cover and the blurbs (“The ideal thriller for the age of C.S.I.” – New York Times). I like violence as much as the next man but rather preferred the character studies, the peculiar cultures of the military, intelligence and ordinary. So, in the SIS building at No 85 Albert Embankment:

We sit down and Seethrough ignores me for a few minutes as he types at a keyboard.

“What’s the reg on your car?” he asks and types it in. “Look at that.” He grins again. “We’ve got you on camera 150 times since you left home.” His eyes are glued to the screen. “You’re actually speeding in this one. Eighty-two miles an hour. I didn’t know your Unimog could go that fast. What were you doing in Amesbury?”

“Petrol,” I say. “And it’s not a Unimog.”

He peers more closely at the screen, and his fingers tap and scroll at the keyboard.

“You bought thirty-five pounds of four-star. And a Mars bar. Bloody clever, this point of sale stuff,” he mutters, then looks up. His assistant is standing besides him.

“Sorry. This is Stella,” he says. “Inside joke.”

The MI6 character, “Seethrough” is full of in-jokes, the jargon of his own self-preening subculture. Elliot is particularly good at these subcultures and the folk thereof. His affable and, I’m told, reasonably authentic ex-SAS character, ‘H’:

“Ironic, isn’t it?” says H. “We get sent to Afghanistan to train them how to use our kit, and then get sent back ten years later to tell them they can’t have it any more.”

“Blowback,” I say. “That’s what the CIA call it.”

“Blow job, more like. Anyway. Best not to talk about any of this from now on.” Then he leaves the room and returns a minute later with a boyish look of mischief on his face.

“When was the last time you saw one of these?”

His right arm swings up, and with it the barrel of an AK-47 assault rifle. This is an unaccustomed sight in rural England, and I splutter a reply through a mouthful of whisky.

“It’s been a while.”

The strength of the book is in these scenes, descriptions of weapons, and people (the sterling H, the facile Seethrough, the sultry temptress). While I enjoyed the book, I felt it could have been much better, with an adjustment of focus. The book is a thriller and foregrounds the story. Put the people and their dilemmas and motivations, their experience, to the forefront, and it could have been a book to re-read and pass on to one’s grandchildren. The difference, I think, between standard SAS memoirs and those of Falconer and Collins, is that the latter foreground the experience of, e.g. slogging through selection or a Mexican stand-off with two IRA boyos in a country lane at dawn; without the charge of human experience, all you have are facts, and facts are soon forgotten, and in any case may or may not be true. As a thriller, then, The Network is well done and enjoyable; but perhaps it could have been more.

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2 thoughts on “Book Review: The Network by Jason Elliot

    October 19, 2012 at 15:15

    I’ve been a fan of this genre and of police thrillers for years and there is no doubt there has been a steady and relentless progression away from character in favour of non-stop, increasingly implausible action. If Agatha Christie were still around, the butler would have machine-gunned the whole household on his way to trying to flatten London with a nuclear bomb. It’s reached the level of absurd self-parody at the airport thriller level, but as you say, even a lot of the good stuff has succumbed. On the film and TV front, C.S.I. characters are so robotic they make Cruise in Mission Impossible seem like a study of the subtle ambiguities and paradoxes of timeless human nature. How they make it to lunchtime without all collapsing from exhaustion is amazing.

    The funny thing is, even when we recognize and complain about this, we’re being swept along to a degree. Reading a LeCarre from forty years ago can be a bit like my experience reading Trollope in high school. Enough with the character, already!

    Only one affair with a sultry temptress? Maybe it’s time for the Service to review its recruitment procedures.

    October 19, 2012 at 17:47

    Much like the terse and overly pumped-up lead characters in video games I am left wondering, why are male thriller leads always such utter dicks?

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